Do you think apple&dog understood anything in that post?
then it must be my writing ;-) may be an example would help. I came across this today (V.Day must be near)
Privacy Policy | 123Greetings
not the best, but it does cover most of the major points. Seriously, anymore help I'm going to have to start charging you Your average lawyer won't understand your business the way you do. If you must, you can get the lawyer to review and tidy up the language AFTER you've done your homework. fth's link is great for localization. If you can't manage a draft with all these.... have to ask, do you really understand what the website (or the business) wants to achieve ?